I’m falling,
I don’t know why.
Did I speak too soon?
Did I lie?
I used to be his favourite,
Of that I’m sure.
Did I rub him the wrong way?
Did I make him sore?
When it started,
I thought he was God.
Did I not obey?
Did I sway?
He said “Think for yourself”
“Use your brain.”
Did I not do the same?
Did I cause him pain?
All I wanted,
Was to reach the top.
Did I ask for a lot?
Did he know what I sought?
“Trounce me and you will die”
“My will thou shall not defy.”
Did he think I would cry?
Did he think I was just another guy?
The war began,
I ran.
Did he think it to be cowardly of me?
Did he think I didn’t try?
He should have killed me,
When he had the chance
Did he not foresee my plan?
Did he presume I would dance?
Now I stand on the dirt,
Can’t help but feel a sense of mirth.
My time will come,
My Will be done.
Subscribe to:
Post Comments (Atom)
8 comments:
Real good use of rhetoric.
Dude!!!
Ahem, poetic now, are we?
Awesome, but many dumb f**** won't understand the title!
buddy.. that's pretty awesome work man.. n if someone doesn't understand the title, let 'em work a little for it..
kudos tho
errr....i see the ghumman in new light! bezazzeled(!), actually.... apologies for the bad french.....but very nice...especially the end.....
maxwel.
Love the idea. Well-executed. Specially liked the way it's tongue-in-cheek, entertaining and intelligent in equal measure!
Do want to confirm something about the title though. In person!
Now this is better than the rest. and by far. short, thought provoking and intelligent
Loved it! Really nice, this one. The best.
Post a Comment